Friday, March 10, 2006

AN EYE FOR AN EYE...

......
a strive,a strike,a mistake,a mind,a price,for price
an instument,a dagger,a gun,a sword,a pill,a smell,a kill
an instance,a plan,a ray for revenge,a scram....
i fight ,lost sight
human 4 a human
eye for an eye

a smeared dagger found its solace inside a broken heart
he found his peace in a dirty start
the sky casts its tears ...a blanket of them
for d body dead in fear...actually they are 2...black n the white
no one aknowledges it..den the clouds in shame
cover this seen from gods sight
praying to an end for this fite
fite of emorions ,temper,in tolerence,revenge
fite of an eye for an eye

all forgotten....d next day
for some it is all simple ...it is a daily job
to find d red circled one among the mob
they wash their hands ..blood smeard or shivering each time they attempt a strive
they remmeber them back home ..hungry faces ...all night that cried
they think no moment n then just shoot....this time
they take a smile for a smile...

they walk through their home gates ...a chill running down their spine...
wat if there was someone else under the instrument...
wat if he was mine?

questions ,answers...ntn matches..
justt mear scratches...
all ...theres a reason...
not born villans...wid guns
guilt through them..it truely runs...

rocks have their own place..thts near the sea
but humans y is it tht thts wat u want to be ???
a strive ,a srtike ,a mistake a mind,
peace,r way to find....
an instrument a dagger a gun a sword a pill a smell a kill
forgiving arms,r way 2 find...
an instance ,a plan, a ray of revenge, a scram
mind control r way to find..
says murder...muder ur evil thots,ur anger,ur thirst..tht cozes sum1 else a curse.

a human 4 a human
.....worth???
an eye for an eye??
rebirth...without loss of breath...
r way 2 find....

4 comments:

chyrag said...

sometimes i just don't get it... but its still cool... nice poem.. made me want to think... WANT to think...

tanfusion7 said...

thanx ....am glad u did think its nice n got ppl thinking

Nikxdave said...

God even you have a blog.. never knew that ..

and above all that even you write poems.. god.. thats cool...

any ways

nice one...


Niket

tanfusion7 said...

hey niks hows ausi'shavin a blast ill rite again was buzy wid exams n relatives....i wanna go 2 ausis tooo tc
tans